Broken
Five years after the difinitive defeat of the Doom Fleet, Lotor makes a surprising discovery on a backwater slave trade planet that grants him everything he wanted, but not in the fashion he wanted.
Title: Broken
Genre: Unknown
Fiction Type: Novel
Rating: Adults Only.
Contains: Moderate sexual situations, Lotor/Allura.
Status: Rough Draft in progress.
tenjp said,
June 9, 2011 at 10:55 am
Awe…he’s so sweet! I like this Lotor because he is power in control…usually Lotor is power with impulsivity but this one is different…I think it’s a much more attractive attribute! Great job like always! I liked how you were able to capture his reaction to Allura as well as her inner turmoil….and the addition of Allura being annoyed with nanny was good insight into her mindset as well
elleclouse said,
June 9, 2011 at 11:19 am
Did you mean to post this on “Broken”?
tenjp said,
June 11, 2011 at 2:35 pm
YES! That’s where my stinking post went!! I was like…I swear I posted this…HA! Mommy brain sucks.